Persuasive writting

This term our school has been preparing for speeches, we have been practising our persuasive writing skills this is my piece. what do you think?

What's wrong with the public school system

Every year parents send their young children away from their family and friends into school. Do we really need teachers to teach us? is school just a system of brainwashing ,is it like prison well I have some answers for you.

People need to take responsibility for their own lives instead of someone else. It shouldn't be up to the government's education system to teach us skills like maths, literacy etc. We are taught to look to an educator, usually, a complete stranger to tell us what is true and worth knowing instead of truth being something we find on our own.

School is like a brainwashing factory. When the young, curious child is old enough he goes to school and undergoes intense programming to be submissive and obedient. After a while, the student finds there are two different kinds of people, controllers and subjects and that he is a subject they learn that obedience is their only duty and their lives are not their own. They are forced to give up their own time and their own energy, They live in fear that if they do not follow orders they will be punished without any proof the did anything wrong, their lives are governed by a bell which tells them when and where to go. Some students don't even want to go and are forced to go against their will. They are taught that school is necessary for them and if they don't obey the controllers and do the work assigned they will fail and not get a good job. They also know that it's never their place to criticize the rules in place by the controllers.

School also violates our rights

1. Freedom of expression children is to speak only what the controllers tell them to speak about if they speak about something not allowed they will be punished.

2. Freedom of movement, at school students, have to be where and the controllers tell them to be and when to go if they aren't where they are supposed to be they will be punished.

3. Freedom from slavery, school controls were you can go and when in addition they control your own body-mind time and energy

And tell you what to do mostly against your own will.

4. Right to identity and to express yourself, in school students are forced to obey a strict dress code and wear what they are told e.g a uniform you are punished if you do not obey the dress codes put in place.

5. Freedom from torture, school unlawfully punishes children without any proof they did anything wrong.

The reasons for being punished aren't even part of the law. Controllers also show favorability by not punishing other

Controllers or authority figures at the school when they don't obey (so-called) rules.

6. Right to safety and wellbeing. In school when students need to go to the bathroom or have a drink, they must ask for permission if the controller says no and they don't obey they will be punished for being humans!

School is also like a prison. Here are some examples: inmates are regularly counted to make sure no one is missing if someone is missing the government may try to find the escapee and bring him back in. Inmates are confined to an area indoors for a long amount of time with no means of escape each day for a short amount of time they are let out to the prison yard for a break when this happens day by day it may lead to depression, frustration and violence to occur. If inmates do not listen to the controllers they will be punished and put into special housing or detention. Inmates are usually watching the clock waiting for the time they are set free.

When the child spends most of his developing years in a controlling environment it prepares him to be easily controlled by the government and its rules in place, and make them think this is the right way things should be and because of this very rarely do they question the rules in place.

Teachers don’t give students the knowledge of life skills like how to clean the house, budget, manage money and so on. Students are learning useless knowledge that they probably won't use in their lives. Teachers also don't give students knowledge that they need for the careers they want to do.

Although some teachers care and love for their students and some schools not even close to violent prisons but no matter how nice the controllers may be in nearly all schools students are brainwashed and controlled to be obedient and are programmed machines and slaves to the corrupt and controlling government, mostly against our own wills, our  rights are violated without even knowing, and students are not learning basic life skills and the knowledge for the career paths they want to be on.